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Poem: If I saw an Angel

If I saw an Angel
my heart would shine.
If I saw an Angel
a rose and a rainbow would shine.
If I saw an Angel
a rose would bloom in the tip of my
eye's and the sun would shine in the very,very blue sky.
-A.G.

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Comments

This is a wonderful poem.

I loved your poem, If I saw an Angel. I was
very touching. Please write more beautiful
poems like this.

I love it

If I saw an Angel was very touching and inspiring.

"If I saw an Angel" was a very sweet poem, and inspirational to anyone who has lost a loved one.

"If I saw an Angel" was very heartfelt.

"If I saw an Angel" was very heartfelt and encouraging.

Your poem, "If I Saw an Angel," was such in inspirational poem. It's good to know that there are second graders out there whom are able to write peoms so well. Your teachers and parent(s) are doing such a wonderful job. Keep up the good work.

Thank you very much for sharing the beautiful poem! It is truly inspiring and heart warming!

Snapps to the poet!

This is beautiful.

"If I Saw an Angel" was a very beautiful and inspirational poem. Keep up the good work!

I really like this poem. I especially loved the picture its words made in my mind. Keep up the good work room 209.

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