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Margaret Adam

This is a great poem. It is clean and true, and it tells stories beyond its few words. I hope you keep writing poems all your life. Thank you for sharing this one.

Joyce Pugh

This is a poem with wonderful insight by someone so very young. Thank you for opening my eyes to see through yours. Thanks Mrs.H for your young poets. Let them fly!

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